Week 7 Story: A Motivational Speech about Selflessness


** see portfolio for updated story: The Brahmin

Since a young age, many of us are taught to be selfless and do the most we can for our community. But this varies from one situation to another. For example, when on a plane, if the oxygen runs out, it is always recommended to put your mask on first before helping anyone else put on their mask. We are told that certain situations require us to put own needs in front of others. But is that the true meaning of being a selfless person? 

(image shows a Mongoose; in the Mahabharata, it is a mongoose who tells the story; image provided by Wikimedia Commons

There are many stories of brave heroes and gods that have given up their well being for the sake of others, however, a simple story from the Mahabharata may the best example of all. The story goes that a Brahmin and his family were living on a fixed, one time a day eating routine. They lived off their corn crops. However, one day a flood-hit and all their crops were washed away. The family was left to starve with hardly any food. Slowly, they started to replant the crops and although they were able to get some food, they began to become thin and weak. One day, the Brahmin was able to make a trip to a nearby town for work and after a long day, he was rewarded with carrots and wheat; enough, to feed his family a full meal for the first time in weeks. When the Brahmin returned home, his wife and daughters got to cooking and used the carrots and wheat to make three different dishes. As the family was getting ready to eat, an old man showed up at their doorstep. Now the man was weaker and thinner than all the family members, shaking in desperation out of hunger. All he wanted was a glass of water. Looking at his despair, the Brahmin offered him his plate of food. After the old man had eaten the Brahmin's food, the family could tell that the man was still suffering from hunger. One by one, all five members of the family gave their food to the old man. After the man was finished eating, he blessed the family and bid them goodbye. The family was again left with no food, but their hearts were full. 

The next morning, when the Brahmin went to check on his crops, they were flourishing. When he returned home, he found his house covered with jewels and gold. His wife informed him that the old man had returned after the brahmin had gone out that morning. The old man they fed was in fact Dharma. Amazed at their sacrifice on his hardest day, Dharma has rewarded them with prosperity and gifts. Thereafter, the Brahmin and his family lived a fulfilling life, giving back just as they had received. 

This story illustrates the goodness that true selflessness can have on a person. Although at the moment we may feel incomplete or as if our priorities were changed, the righteousness of our actions will be served. As they say, good things happen to good people, especially when we do good out of the goodness of our hearts. 

Authors Note: This is the story that the Mongoose tells the Pandavas in Part D of the Mahabharata about the Brahmin and his family who withheld eating and gave their food to someone else (who ended up being Dharma). I thought the story was quite motivational when I read it the first time, so I have rewritten the story in the format of a motivational speech. I incorporated the original story, but also added some motivational words of my own. I did change the original story just a little bit, not too extremely.
 
Author: The Story of the Great War by Annie Besant



Comments

  1. Hi Amandeep,

    I like how you round out the story in a way that challenges the reader to consider what the story could mean in their own life. I was a little confused when you chose the example about the air mask in the airplane. I assumed this would be a story about how sometimes it is necessary to take care of oneself in order to be able to take care of another, since the reason why we're told to put our own mask on first is because we can't help others if we have passed out from oxygen deprivation.

    Your retelling is concise and easy to follow. I like that you use a picture of a mongoose and mention the mongoose as the storyteller. It helped me orient myself to the reading. I had already forgotten that the story came from the mongoose. As you revise, I look forward to seeing how you expand this into the motivational speech genre. I think it is a great idea.

    Thanks for sharing!

    -Eden

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  2. I'm not going to lie, I clicked on the story because of the picture! I didn't know that's what a mongoose looks like haha.
    As for the story, it was really nice to read. I didn't see any major mistakes or weird language, which is hard to do with such a long story. I wish in your author's notes, you pointed how what you changed from the original, since I don't remember the message of the story. But I enjoyed reading this.

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  3. Amandeep,

    I remembered the exact story that you were recounting- I think it proves your point quite well. I like that you tried to tie the true selflessness of the brahmin story to a real-life event. However, I think you stretched your comparison a little. Putting your mask on first allows you to be conscious so you can help others. I understand the point you're trying to make, but I think that putting on your own mask first is selfless. Compare it to fire fighters or soldiers in war- they can't help the other members of their team if they themselves are unnecessarily putting themselves in danger. Even lifeguards are taught to save others without endangering themselves. That allows them to continue saving others! I'm not sure there is a perfect example for true selflessness.
    Great story- I like that it made me think about a topic like this.

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  4. Hi Amandeep. I like the message of your story, but I don't think that putting on your mask in a cabin decompression situation is comparable to this story. The whole point of putting on your mask first is so you can help others. Not all selflessness requires huge sacrifice. However, I like that you've taken a story and made it into a topical message that makes people think and inspires discussion!

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  5. Hey Amandeep!
    First off I really enjoyed your story! You did a great job keeping the retelling short and sweet. I really enjoy how you ask the readers to use the story to reflect on their own lives and how it relates. The pictures work perfectly and give us some great imagery while reading. Great work and can't wait to see what you write next!

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  6. Amandeep,
    I think that this was such a good story that also had an incredible message associated with it! I love that you have created a story that makes readers feel good inside and truly motivates others to want to commit selfless acts for others. I think that everyone in our class needs to read this! There is a lesson that any and every one can learn and benefit from.

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  7. Hi Amandeep,
    I love how you told this story in kind of a relaxed voice. It felt like you were giving a talk show of some sort. I like how you made the audience think about whether or not it was beneficial to help yourself first or help others. The story really made me think about how important it is sometimes to sacrifice for others sometimes. Especially in this quarantine. It sucks to be inside, but we got to think of others.
    Can't wait to read more!!

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